Editing your First Draft – Writing on Caffeine and Short Story Snippet!

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Fayan watched the bandits fan out in front of her. The Fortune’s Path was the quickest way to the Sunrise Mountains, but it was pitted with many bandit camps all along it. Most did not travel this way because of them.

Fayan had chosen this way for them. She needed gold if she was going to buy her way into Arieum and honour her Mayma, make her proud. This time, there were five bandits spread out over the road, against only her and Flyne, her horse.

It wasn’t really a fair fight for the bandits. Fayan almost felt sorry for them.

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